Something I Would Change . . . .
If it was up to me I would change that my brother Isaiah Garza, has recently moved to Texas. The reason why is because hi is my older brother and every young girl needs their brother to guide them through the right paths. Before my brother moved the two of us got so close. Similar to how we were when we were toddlers. If he would have never moved everyone would be happy besides my uncle. The reason I think my uncle will be unhappy is because he is the one that wanted him to one with him so Isaiah can help him out with things. My uncle is getting old, so he wanted Isaiah's help. By my brother going out their he changed his life because out there is like country, where he is located and in Lorain the streets are dangerous. Especially , with the friends he choose to be around. So tome he did the right thing. Everyone was very proud of his outcome but he is missed. We just have to respect the factthat he was thinking about bettering himself as an individual.

Te'aira,
ReplyDeleteGood job. Be sure to use a formal tone so it does not sound like you are talking to a friend.